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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网; _. {% ?0 j8 n- V5 H* v" g
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(一) 同义反译法 8 J1 }3 K; ^- ?7 U- U& g, h
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar. 1 q7 ]5 L0 e1 g' N" I+ ?
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
2. I'll be here for good this time. * U5 ]! Q4 g6 N' H
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」)
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out. $ G2 b" u' n: a
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」)
4. "Wait, he is serious." 3 G6 b. E' x/ J- c" U- i. e
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) # j: h9 X2 k' V% K
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!" ! e9 E$ S( e4 n- F+ j/ J
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」)
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(二) 删减解释词 4 r# H2 z* M, n# a$ [* T+ e% r
例子： % u- O! W, D) q9 Z0 i1 o" e  w* T
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a 5 k& ~5 J% o1 e; H- c( F
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women. 7 ~9 H" T- P7 U8 L- h
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。
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(三) 短句拆译
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」
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(四) 译词推陈出新
例子：
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
lower. - m1 g' C5 }  Y
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。
原词原译改译 8 O6 Y7 h" x* o/ G/ E5 r" r  C

when 当......的时候等到......的时候 : r9 \5 P, K4 \

act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求 / ?0 ~+ x; a, s1 T* K

a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人 1 ^) K! d# V3 |: E
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了

(五) 解释性添词 5 O5 a' }' x2 j* F+ r+ {
例子：
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet 1 g3 m3 e4 `* B% \8 l; ]
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。 ! P0 g4 G) Y+ Y- J* d) i5 P, D+ }

(六) 词无定译
例子：
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, . H! l; q0 m; }% l
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions.
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。0 j; v: v- J0 p5 p' _
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(七) 精炼译词 3 {# w1 u& l6 p$ N' s: m
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A new dignity crept into his walk. ! I+ \' D# y5 d4 c4 L
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。
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(八) 删削"When"字 2 ?' S# G% J, P3 [/ ]
例子：
1. When he saw me, he was startled. ' N2 F. N2 l$ c% p+ m
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) + |- W5 d2 C! |: i, C6 W
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the ; }5 P+ _+ `- Z6 J: ?; V. x9 {1 [
head, and knocking on them round?"
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......) + v2 w% \+ G4 v8 q' ^' r2 `. K& `
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(九) 感叹词的不同译法 3 E  E( p7 h) a+ N2 ^
例子： * `1 M! [" G  h) m3 b3 t) e9 ?
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want ! v/ m& X' S+ \6 ]* m' A
them!" . C+ m; V; q  f$ K+ p! ~
"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 ( R/ L4 t- k. @4 l' h- L
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" ' [! K+ L) v7 E% [7 c; R. `4 ?! C
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」 9 q+ g  w. u% w6 w& I5 h
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") / J- ~0 u5 _9 t
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader, 2 b# _5 Z) x4 ]! B6 q
jocularly; ... 0 z+ r8 H$ A6 u6 ~# o4 j: S
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy / X! |, }8 ~, V" p
interval of silence.
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) 1 r6 T$ p3 R* s- I2 K
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 # `5 j2 k/ [4 Q- X- I" z6 A

(十) 顺拆法
例子： ; `7 q1 w7 Z2 Y6 a
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue & @2 a' Z+ ]9 T, k) o
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic, 2 {/ j6 z6 I4 V# _6 f
social and demographic factors. 1 Q- x/ W2 D( |7 n
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。 9 T! f( ^' h2 L
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(十一) 倒拆法 ! I& I4 d; Q( ^+ P
例子： ( ^& e( g9 g; y9 S1 L! E
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。

(十二) 抽词拆句法 - n! i) v! [& r# `; L
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of   }1 H* B) g7 c, \# B+ \
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. 4 q$ ^2 o5 M3 V& [+ G
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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