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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网, O, X6 m, u, `+ S- G0 k9 ^1 _

(一) 同义反译法
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
2. I'll be here for good this time.
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」)
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.   `: K+ X( B! K: f
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) / [. {$ O- T! u7 @5 R. ]4 h
4. "Wait, he is serious."
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) - q# ]" ~. c7 @
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!" - `* W" X4 i7 R5 k2 Z9 S( [' o
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) ( q' o! G/ F6 T& }$ O4 @

(二) 删减解释词
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The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of ! T# Q4 h7 {4 A& M5 y/ H- N
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a 1 p+ F- z: o' E9 N9 z4 S* J7 o. @
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women. ( N7 B2 s& |3 \4 `0 M2 L0 m+ \
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。
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(三) 短句拆译
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" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..." 5 h3 O$ C2 W7 b8 C, h
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」 & E* ^" k2 o* }8 j
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(四) 译词推陈出新
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When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with ' B+ `) P9 _+ S  x
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
lower. # Z) n0 [9 c' x) k
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。
原词原译改译 . R( v3 T. L0 k" m1 b) N9 y9 ?8 U' D
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when 当......的时候等到......的时候

act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求 9 g( ]! J# I5 H: N1 l- B

a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人 0 o' f8 h, h: d/ Z; [

ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理

in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了& S, b1 P  e3 A$ O

(五) 解释性添词
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"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。
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(六) 词无定译 * W! U$ K4 ]% j4 i/ [9 z
例子：
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, 6 \, L7 d9 \' ]; S4 K
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions.
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。

(七) 精炼译词
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A new dignity crept into his walk.
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。

(八) 删削"When"字
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1. When he saw me, he was startled. + {" J$ c3 g7 _! N! f3 t
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) 3 m! w% x9 ~0 _
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the % k5 t. A$ s0 Y" h* g) Z
head, and knocking on them round?"
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)

(九) 感叹词的不同译法
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1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want ; ]4 r, B( H* Z/ B: ]7 c! _8 y- j
them!"
"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」 9 {# |: c7 `: o1 f  A5 W
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" : ?$ D& d+ n( Q, O
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」 $ k+ G6 w$ S7 q/ _
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") 0 L3 X% U* J3 ^0 j7 [8 n
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader, 7 t2 F+ s" V+ B3 P
jocularly; ... 2 n. H0 J: m2 J2 {; c& q8 U
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
interval of silence. 8 ~- K  e. v2 _* r8 }
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) ) v3 a% b$ H0 E/ n
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。

(十) 顺拆法
例子：
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue 2 v- }& o, n+ }7 a6 a4 T7 ?
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic, : O' J) \( T  R/ a
social and demographic factors.
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 : e1 x( e2 X% K; k9 s6 O
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。 & t8 ^0 w) s6 Y. ]4 u
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(十一) 倒拆法 * o7 i: k2 z1 _2 w& Q& W1 y
例子：
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his 5 H( ?: U; Q4 f) w5 `' S! J
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。

(十二) 抽词拆句法
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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