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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网$ u9 Z2 T+ F& x5 B2 O+ q0 Q) }

(一) 同义反译法
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1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」) 9 c/ n8 |' r' J; Z6 z* K' K8 l
2. I'll be here for good this time. . L3 V0 O6 L# ^& R; D1 J
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」)
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) ' O4 k2 K7 N( ~7 f1 K5 \$ P* t
4. "Wait, he is serious."
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」)
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) ) Q- d- R% W) `- n- S

(二) 删减解释词
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The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a 7 v! E3 W5 P4 Y/ v; D
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。

(三) 短句拆译 % g# I" R) F3 s- u) \( v! S
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..." 4 Q3 R: _$ q1 a8 Z% w% q
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」 1 b# G! f5 j' {

(四) 译词推陈出新 0 T/ X& g6 h; A! I& n8 h* T; h4 ?
例子：
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with 9 R& t0 ]+ D7 L7 z+ N6 a1 [
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a ! a0 X2 A, T0 B# b2 J# m0 j
lower. ) j/ D2 k9 }) w- g, H
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 5 l' u# a3 C2 [9 z3 O$ y
原词原译改译 : N2 m7 V: E. d4 r3 _5 x( P$ S

when 当......的时候等到......的时候

act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求
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a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人   d2 ^9 S% ~" r7 Q/ B- w
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 % G; ]: f- s& b! q$ d$ ^* x
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了

(五) 解释性添词
例子：
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have , G: S7 `! Z4 P! r. ~- b
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。 $ i. ~( P0 z1 K( m  u8 b# F% v: v

(六) 词无定译 1 A- C! d2 s8 w- |# z: ]0 N% F
例子： ! d/ L( a" [+ u$ Z- f  K1 h3 d
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or " w( O8 c5 s( [
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later,
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous ) G& t; x' R8 `# v& B+ r
conditions. 8 A# k3 _$ {7 x, M7 c
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。5 w5 Q5 E/ p7 n- `( [
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(七) 精炼译词 0 G$ r1 a8 n& s5 u
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A new dignity crept into his walk. 4 e% Q/ d- i- \, S& @
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。 ' {/ M9 h- H. K/ u% T- i# g
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(八) 删削"When"字 1 ^6 K- W3 z$ l
例子：8 s; K& _  p* X; S
1. When he saw me, he was startled. 5 O. k5 J2 I5 P; H# U
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......)
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the ; w3 O5 y! j4 [* |
head, and knocking on them round?" . Y  e. Y9 C' e: g/ [
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)
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(九) 感叹词的不同译法 # ~7 b; t9 [( N  X# s# k: _: F
例子：
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want . L' t" h4 s' f
them!"
"Why, Eva, your room is full now." ( l5 n- V3 A' a- G/ N- @: U
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 & j/ s* x" r: H: |1 A
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" + H  h- c: t9 z" L. R: H5 k
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") 8 `  C0 t3 J9 d/ n, M9 u8 N6 s
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader, 3 u! C+ r, b' v1 u
jocularly; ... / z7 }7 A: k2 w( l0 n5 K6 G
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy : I0 {' E, j( j: j/ D% P; I/ H
interval of silence.
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」)
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；...... $ r# r) m% L) G% ^0 S+ D& s! t5 q
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 # R- T5 V- s7 f5 ^2 }( x

(十) 顺拆法 ! e0 q5 w( {$ [4 H% {2 [
例子：
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue / `. x$ h* Y9 e4 R- q) N
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors.   G. N) B7 Q. p. J- Z
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。

(十一) 倒拆法
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To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute / & _1 H6 z! z- U0 z9 P# X* b/ B
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。
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(十二) 抽词拆句法
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All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the : w& M! q" H8 V6 k3 ?0 N0 u
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. - I* e" j6 Z* o2 m3 r
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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