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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网; i0 l+ t' S( S2 O

(一) 同义反译法
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar. " K* x: M# E; H6 c( O
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
2. I'll be here for good this time. * d; F0 n, d6 |
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) 6 ^( |' F7 q0 U) {; U4 Q3 I
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.   V3 L3 ^: p$ C
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) ! ?8 l: d; L7 d6 a2 ]# R
4. "Wait, he is serious." : U1 l1 B% [2 F7 R# i( G
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) " D5 f# t) Z" u+ B. S' V. e
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) ! V! X$ \0 b0 O7 V4 i

(二) 删减解释词 " Z. Q6 U, |7 N9 ^+ b: ]% T8 h# D
例子： $ R# j3 x, C6 [6 o6 U5 K  e
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of 0 O6 x4 x: T/ B- r* w8 B
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。1 h7 L( D* E/ R9 i! i$ v
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(三) 短句拆译
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..." 4 {2 H$ D; O0 ]7 U# n
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」

(四) 译词推陈出新
例子：
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
lower.
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 6 R' o" F( \' R9 ?6 u7 t' ~! f
原词原译改译 # F* N7 m1 _- s) ^9 _' @

when 当......的时候等到......的时候 8 G3 f. T; I* b( l: T& r

act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求 . L% N: D$ p% X& M; S4 c6 ^
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a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人 6 |- F, r  {% e$ \: Z! J5 r
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 4 t2 l% K  z! y8 j- _  ?- m7 [

in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了* n7 d5 c2 |; l$ u
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(五) 解释性添词 & J) p& _: T3 ~) L$ o' L0 ?3 b, ]
例子：
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have 5 p- c! z+ ]  O* J4 z0 p. h. z
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I 3 K; x" }0 o. K9 E
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet. 6 o+ \: f6 {( K: x; X
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。

(六) 词无定译
例子：
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, % m) [* B( C, C8 ^/ S& E
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous + n7 I% M) `0 Y3 n! i/ K
conditions. 4 _( C' z* k0 z4 P/ ~3 E- k
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。

(七) 精炼译词
例子：
A new dignity crept into his walk.
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。

(八) 删削"When"字
例子：
1. When he saw me, he was startled.
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) / W, [4 k' U/ K/ b7 W7 ?
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the
head, and knocking on them round?" + X$ }5 _5 b, q- `1 h
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)
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(九) 感叹词的不同译法
例子： ; ]; o# e7 x* V/ X# D  T+ T
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
them!" % Q2 L! e7 @. ?8 h3 z  x! @: p
"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 / k# H7 f) i% y
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" ' v, S5 B9 B( ^6 y6 F8 I
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」 ) f  y# a  r0 t2 x3 m1 G
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") 0 x0 D6 ~/ |  k" h$ h4 M" [. z
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
jocularly; ...   N) l2 U1 z. o) {2 X' T  h' X/ r
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
interval of silence. 2 Q& T7 e- j% c
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」)
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 6 Z9 i- {- U) `5 v

(十) 顺拆法
例子： . I* [, ?0 L- Z- R4 l
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors.
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 ) _+ p3 N6 ^( G5 b, L
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。
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(十一) 倒拆法 8 }! f9 ~+ y6 V
例子： - e, [0 j" k+ W, s
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute / " F9 W% X, G! y. g9 e
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。 , ^2 q; c. Q, W# H# ?6 G

(十二) 抽词拆句法 2 m4 s. x& c4 ~
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of / y& }3 ?% H! }* z) p1 [5 o
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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