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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网
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(一) 同义反译法
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」) 6 M, Z+ {" y! @9 t8 C
2. I'll be here for good this time. 2 V3 I. U+ @; k# h/ n: T' R
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) # u- Y2 h" A- T  A' x4 \0 `
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.   m5 |" Y9 `0 c% h
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」)
4. "Wait, he is serious." $ S/ v4 ~+ c) ~9 `0 V
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」)
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!" ; L8 v1 O, G$ k9 T5 h7 l' A
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」)
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(二) 删减解释词
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The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of 3 x) v6 V* w2 t6 t2 l, W
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a : t4 [% Z# U; B1 V3 Q2 ?8 N( I
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women. 4 @& y0 \0 y, |
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。: X) ^8 D* p& \

(三) 短句拆译 # z. f- F6 h3 x4 N
例子： 6 `, I" ^' t' w
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」   m# T: k( O6 h* a  l7 V0 [+ J
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(四) 译词推陈出新 $ y9 ]: t% P3 [
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When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with   d& ]( r0 [0 o( q3 m$ ?
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
lower.
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 ; x- g! R& L, s  f/ l4 V
原词原译改译 ) n& ], p+ q4 N" p5 A
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when 当......的时候等到......的时候 8 V: h, f0 c1 G

act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求 ! w9 V) T1 E- ?

a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 $ d: J5 y1 S7 j' x  z+ E  C
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了1 d, `/ f0 N( m% J% n$ P

(五) 解释性添词
例子： ) g: i' p8 U1 U" d" v6 D" K2 z8 R
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。 3 |5 E* J" Y# l# l5 q* F1 T
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(六) 词无定译 + a& J, e" L7 P  t7 [# _
例子：
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or 3 b7 f) Q; K0 Q9 r0 A8 G
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later,
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions.
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。

(七) 精炼译词
例子：
A new dignity crept into his walk.
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。 $ a* g) T1 Q8 F" ?+ Z* `
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。

(八) 删削"When"字 2 D0 I! _! `( L; I/ Z+ ?
例子：
1. When he saw me, he was startled. 3 U" D* N+ g8 ~; m; w) b
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) 8 v& ]  e8 |# M% v+ G
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the
head, and knocking on them round?"
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......) 2 v6 \+ _/ Y/ x/ w) b
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(九) 感叹词的不同译法
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1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want ; i3 l% E+ R  L2 _- q; S
them!" # b; k+ d4 P: |* o1 _; Z  p% w( j
"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?"
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") % Q% Q! y6 G3 q3 p8 h: d
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to 4 B6 Z4 x: |% P, u4 j) y) J
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader, . l3 D+ S1 G" S' ~& G9 \
jocularly; ...
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy 0 X( R: J1 E' D* {5 u& x! ]+ ~* o
interval of silence. " j. l! D3 c1 w1 C3 b/ v* E+ c
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) 8 O' C$ Y( t# C8 C8 |( Z
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；...... ( p, d" c! A: {& O
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 0 i; d8 p- E% Y2 B
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(十) 顺拆法
例子：
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors.
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 * `( j* l$ ]) Q! v1 y- R' F7 A
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。

(十一) 倒拆法
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To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。

(十二) 抽词拆句法 + s$ s8 l- \" v" Q2 ~
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of & l; _0 c! k, A+ Q' d
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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