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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网6 x* ^6 c! e6 }& k0 e
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(一) 同义反译法 ! E/ B; O7 i/ C4 n
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
2. I'll be here for good this time. 0 `# A0 Q1 {3 M' }1 u. L
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) 7 r  R( _/ i( c0 e- N
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out. 7 l' C% T$ E7 S. z; C, m
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」)
4. "Wait, he is serious."
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) , |- F: l2 n/ _7 u: ~
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」)

(二) 删减解释词 " B& a( v/ \" x% {) f; S
例子：
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a # w/ \+ y8 d' Z% \  a/ x! u
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。

(三) 短句拆译 8 z  k% r, W6 A9 b9 T" M
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」 % M9 g  d: b$ k+ \
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(四) 译词推陈出新
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When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with ! q3 l( _' x# x: n8 T* M
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a $ e4 w, M: \  j. t. [
lower. " h6 X0 r! u, Q/ f
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 : r7 O$ S) @: J: }; k
原词原译改译 2 L2 w$ ~: C! ?9 L; O2 i% _
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when 当......的时候等到......的时候 / n4 I! M6 z+ {9 J6 @9 O2 y

act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求 ) P5 D  c5 e' O9 x7 c

a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人

ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了  E# g7 G2 _* U# t
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(五) 解释性添词 % @$ g0 s- I% y4 _( W4 @
例子：
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have 9 [* Z, G2 q6 i5 K" T! L) b1 F
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I / f6 f, i' s* ~8 Q
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet ; B) s2 B. T$ x; g9 n4 s4 s
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.   U! J9 Y' _0 v1 G+ M6 ~
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。 1 c7 `" n" j7 }# L8 K
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(六) 词无定译
例子：
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or 7 m: ~6 `* T# l5 Z0 V! K
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later,
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions. 5 U3 S6 }2 |) C4 B9 V7 r
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。

(七) 精炼译词 ; W6 z- Y* x$ }
例子： " S0 M* B3 h' y2 E: M0 a; P
A new dignity crept into his walk. + W+ [8 s9 Q+ j; M/ K
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。 + j' |, N0 o5 Z
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。

(八) 删削"When"字 , l) I- R+ c, o! {! T9 t9 w. O0 g
例子：
1. When he saw me, he was startled.
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) 3 l+ i  w4 V5 A' J
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the
head, and knocking on them round?"
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......) ) M9 q. T& s" c; Y- C9 d9 }
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(九) 感叹词的不同译法 ( ^* }% d- o' Y1 U1 w: Z: ]
例子： 1 O) }* ~  `# z9 E- v
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
them!"
"Why, Eva, your room is full now." ; L5 M9 W9 x( \' U4 V" f5 S/ N
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" / }# l, ~1 @5 L4 m$ ]0 |+ ]0 \' j
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」 ( K1 m. L# K0 h3 Q/ N* o4 h
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.")
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to 8 R# \) \; }# K! ^. ]
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader, 6 x& |8 f6 w1 J8 S/ O/ r
jocularly; ...
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy 0 r: V, }8 T* u, S6 g, v8 a0 P
interval of silence. 1 y) y- R5 f: Q* e
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」)
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 ! t" }& A; u# i" H6 q. c* F2 ^
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(十) 顺拆法 & c/ O) ?0 s0 S
例子：
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors.
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。

(十一) 倒拆法
例子：
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute / " B% r( }9 {" |, a2 |, d  e
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his ! }! A" Z! e3 W. _2 w
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。 , ~; t% y% l- @& d3 T6 |

(十二) 抽词拆句法 0 g0 \3 H  p1 ^. X, R; V: S
例子： 9 J' H6 E1 X& ~5 D
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the . P3 |! X9 l# r: t: r( C
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of ; P/ U; @, u4 A- x! v) w
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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