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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网5 z$ f2 F' C7 v. Y" ^
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(一) 同义反译法
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar. 4 i# W3 y0 A" D" u
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」) . s& M1 W: F* Y4 V$ l3 V
2. I'll be here for good this time.
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) 0 E9 l. ?6 Y% l* t
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) 2 U6 z( d8 W4 b* A4 _$ E
4. "Wait, he is serious."
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) . f; j$ x" |* |
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!" 1 s6 p9 _& G7 _: T3 z6 a  w
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) 0 O' Q9 X2 M6 L- Q" |
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(二) 删减解释词
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The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of 1 w! a: G- ^# r  j- y
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a ! L! G6 J: X0 S0 ?
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women. 7 x. a9 X( e5 E' m6 v& X, f. P
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。

(三) 短句拆译
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」
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(四) 译词推陈出新 - o1 V+ x& h8 h5 G2 {
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When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with & o8 m3 b" x" F7 z
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a 9 w+ N7 m) b7 V3 s0 l8 k! I
lower.
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。 * c% N' r" G2 {9 ^) Q: Q4 e% o7 z8 I
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。
原词原译改译 % @: H. a4 W$ [! V( R. z

when 当......的时候等到......的时候 - Y4 P8 Q' ]* v

act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求

a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理

in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了% }% v% l% F; g2 Q; f1 L
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(五) 解释性添词
例子： 1 \7 a1 G/ M* @  V6 t
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have ) _& u7 ~( j1 T
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I 3 ~4 H* l. h  q( ~4 a
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet 0 X9 ?* `* o2 R, ]- R+ |
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。

(六) 词无定译 3 e3 }5 f0 s! ]9 l$ j( E3 A% g; ^# Y
例子：
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or , x3 ~4 m- ^4 t8 \4 E, W5 U5 g4 y
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, 9 p' r; U8 t, J  r4 W
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous ' @# \' h0 V5 C0 g, Y: Z- B5 u. J8 w: ]
conditions. : S  w. s6 k% q: i# D( J
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。! `/ `* C# A. K2 o% G

(七) 精炼译词
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A new dignity crept into his walk.
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。
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(八) 删削"When"字 1 f' v0 r6 r0 A/ C8 L
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1. When he saw me, he was startled. ' S3 P8 e; u7 X- j" ]! x1 e
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......)
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the
head, and knocking on them round?" 3 ?3 n; e) U$ I7 L) I& p# N$ @
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......) 9 M; z) \- |) {
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(九) 感叹词的不同译法 ; y$ @. {: p. r& `
例子：
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
them!" / t, D+ k+ r$ @; Y
"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 . K7 }0 G8 }) |3 R# \1 `
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」 5 _" V; l7 _1 G
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?"
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」 1 Z; t. U5 @6 X4 J9 D7 ~/ ^- }
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") 1 B# U% N- @( M  Q+ `: Q3 ^; ^
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to 8 l% z' G0 c$ ]  J1 A4 p% {  {# |
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader, 7 X: W: U) o6 V7 T, {& t
jocularly; ...
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy ' [# T5 r1 [. d4 y
interval of silence. ) ]; o# j" w- K* o
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」)
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；...... . m3 L7 ~+ q+ A8 ?! Y4 z
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 : b3 c& K; p- u+ ?# u2 }0 ^+ _
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(十) 顺拆法 ) {3 z/ s2 R9 J  m! O1 z9 X( H
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His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue 5 O" Y/ x/ R3 [0 e5 U% s+ Y
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors. 9 m1 c' K* T( X0 t3 I
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 9 Q8 J5 d0 ]$ \8 W6 ~$ G
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。
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(十一) 倒拆法 " y  B& f/ k. t8 }: F
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To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。
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(十二) 抽词拆句法
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All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. - Y6 F/ M6 D. J2 w+ _; t2 p! L# D/ J
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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