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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网

(一) 同义反译法
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1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」) # c7 g/ l+ N" A$ }2 z4 @, q, ^
2. I'll be here for good this time. : T$ o. G+ _* i
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」)
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out. ) ?8 J7 l7 l! C9 r6 `& m
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) 4 _; }6 p4 S; f4 n! i6 R, l/ E
4. "Wait, he is serious." ( V; b1 m% z/ B6 E
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」)
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) / v/ u) `& T2 O0 c# x/ o: \' D( a
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(二) 删减解释词
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The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women. : q2 k" z  |& Z
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。( x& [) M7 p" p  U  R3 J1 n
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(三) 短句拆译
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」 - \+ B1 [* ^3 [3 Z. @; ]0 }
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(四) 译词推陈出新 1 j; \3 J& d3 B1 j4 I3 ?1 k( ]
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When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with ; E  Q9 ?) G( C( K  U  g3 g. A
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
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原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。
原词原译改译 % h6 J* n5 Y- ?: s7 T9 I: W

when 当......的时候等到......的时候
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act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求 4 F% Z1 l  q5 |3 ~0 h) t
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a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人

ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理

in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了$ R8 ~; H* n# q* M8 H

(五) 解释性添词
例子：
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have 4 K+ e: z5 x3 J- Z, v) d
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet 2 W  H* Y' T' Y2 p  K0 y
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。
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(六) 词无定译
例子：
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, # J6 _7 w" r# G
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions.
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。7 Q' g( X3 T3 b
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(七) 精炼译词
例子：
A new dignity crept into his walk. 5 X, [8 Y' F) r* Q. W- l" k
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。 6 B; Y) {9 i: T9 \/ D
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(八) 删削"When"字 2 L5 b2 P. Q1 x1 l0 \
例子：
1. When he saw me, he was startled.
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......)
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the ( i: b( m+ ~% G5 K" W
head, and knocking on them round?" / c: @, L# c  S! \1 n% E
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......) 2 h% c& ~4 }2 @* Z! F
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(九) 感叹词的不同译法
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1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
them!" " U6 W- f4 w0 T  `' U3 s& U1 Y
"Why, Eva, your room is full now." ) t" o5 N3 I6 k- ^: v% |
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?"
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") 2 P' h- G- ]. d
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to 3 K* e2 e* F# N8 \
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
jocularly; ... . U3 K" g) J9 K  f5 x5 q$ v
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
interval of silence. * g0 d& u+ |' k+ Y+ l" c
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) - X0 W4 b! y% C" E; e
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；...... $ E4 P9 m( i" U( C  y# k
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。
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(十) 顺拆法 & Z, P: \. ~8 v% j
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His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors. 8 z, Y) C: a  L% g" a7 `
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 7 M3 [; z/ [3 G! Q" u
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。
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(十一) 倒拆法
例子：
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute / 5 L% b- C) B' J0 d+ C$ e" r% r
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。 ) K1 i) A% t/ w
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(十二) 抽词拆句法 : Q1 W$ k! N& S6 _
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of # m5 r/ B% |, ^
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. ' G( H  n  d, E8 o, k3 g& x7 E
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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