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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网( K2 }0 W+ e( C8 _5 b% X" W: X. F
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(一) 同义反译法 $ F4 i- I  D1 `4 K
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar. ( U" U) C/ _* X- P& |
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」) 2 W6 I/ g+ ~. F2 P& Y8 T. w
2. I'll be here for good this time. , ?5 N& t- C4 W3 ]5 s: g/ K
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) + Q, Z0 S% X" S" G& p, K: H
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」)
4. "Wait, he is serious." " r# k; L: b3 C; J  V
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」)
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!" : R( N, Y7 Z- d) g9 }
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) ; S" N! G' E6 ?! ]( [

(二) 删减解释词
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The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of $ `/ o% v$ a' h* R4 @: s
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a % w4 a! ]2 j$ G5 M+ j" ^4 ~
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。
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(三) 短句拆译
例子： % n  w7 K0 U! s) O1 h
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」 * u: }( w: f- w$ x) s( A% @1 b0 r
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(四) 译词推陈出新 + `4 W7 V# u3 @' C6 a  D, V
例子：
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
lower.
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 1 X/ N- v  T% p( G
原词原译改译
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when 当......的时候等到......的时候

act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求

a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人 ; `6 e. K! U  U4 \% r1 f

ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 0 e5 u& y  D, [" I
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了
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(五) 解释性添词 # n1 u" G+ O4 b; f& L5 g
例子： 7 |: G/ V5 x7 Y1 n8 n
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。 " W! E% r9 i: l* x, w! G

(六) 词无定译 % j! i, K1 ]& D  b
例子：
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or 8 a* `# E( S& n( U) E
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, 2 i$ {, f% W- N
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous % Q0 l0 f$ \$ e: x9 I. q0 i4 U
conditions. 7 T. P3 o- m  \& H; ], _7 g7 j
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。- N5 U4 O+ a+ X$ G: X
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(七) 精炼译词 / i: d$ c9 Z: o# ~. x* S: c
例子： " L( \1 j7 Q6 G: M
A new dignity crept into his walk. 7 l  ~; b' D; l7 v2 _
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。 & S, L0 M/ r, @2 L! L% S6 p, m& ^- j
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。
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(八) 删削"When"字 3 P! ]' ?* x2 j# O0 J
例子：$ j7 q9 p: [2 Q" f# v8 O% ^
1. When he saw me, he was startled.
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......)
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the 8 `4 a5 Y3 V9 o- q  @
head, and knocking on them round?" " O$ _) p+ A$ U. ^
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......) 4 a' C7 M4 }  ^+ Z% |, c$ T+ \, R

(九) 感叹词的不同译法
例子：
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
them!" 0 ?2 t# O9 H/ I" Y* U! T! y3 `% _
"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" ! b" A9 h" c0 ?0 _7 [) m
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」 : X/ @, c& V( g8 d5 A( M8 k
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") ( a/ R. ^4 k) c; k- c3 C
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader, # `4 s0 ]* ^* c* }0 P
jocularly; ... ; q8 G( q$ k+ R" N) \" H( F7 e6 [
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy 7 k( J! J: ?: a  ]5 p5 x
interval of silence. 1 O& a5 x, w/ D& h
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」)
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 6 R2 e6 m$ m* C% Z+ `6 x
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(十) 顺拆法 & Q" H; `8 v+ Y
例子：
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic, 9 E) e  \4 c, I" H# \- E
social and demographic factors.
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 , u1 S8 z1 ~/ k! `+ f
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。

(十一) 倒拆法
例子：
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute / 1 N# E- o% x" a  Q3 W$ R
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon. - N! o; X+ C+ j( }+ s, C! K9 N* c
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。

(十二) 抽词拆句法
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All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the ' h$ e: f3 S" K! ^* m/ a
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of   c! d# q7 M7 M7 e0 V/ U
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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