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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网2 o' m# \+ J# T/ K# v

(一) 同义反译法 1 h' j7 H* ]$ k# N
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
2. I'll be here for good this time.
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」)
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out. # e% _4 O4 {& Q& R1 K' S
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) ! K/ a$ k0 }9 Q: H' _  l+ h
4. "Wait, he is serious."   N! U7 x: `( e; t, [
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」)
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!" / Q" b3 J8 Z0 \% a" X- Z8 t
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」)

(二) 删减解释词 % F! i5 @+ C1 m  O% q5 X
例子： % t$ u  b$ ~( o; E& n5 t
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a " j! c- f" c( a; p
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women. : }" l6 }+ D* }% ?
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。
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(三) 短句拆译
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..." 4 y) k( q! o+ {) ^" m
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」
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(四) 译词推陈出新 3 H6 R; [, o" V# ^/ `8 F9 i
例子：
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a 5 ~+ F$ H8 {6 O
lower. 7 n( Z2 A" V6 l& D+ }
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 , F" {$ l" K' q: j  N# j' j3 K
原词原译改译 & H+ e3 t( j& x/ e- `! K( \$ ]
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when 当......的时候等到......的时候 5 H0 k4 \+ N6 n% v- ]" q

act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求 4 f* o, t/ g4 q6 R3 A1 H- N

a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人 * b% h7 X3 j5 |5 g0 m% y
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了! i& j  n6 i+ B- Y, b' L( A0 K

(五) 解释性添词
例子： 1 L. M2 `. @' L8 ^* s
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have : ^0 y1 J' B5 s  P% D( T
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet ) F/ g) P  ]  x; d
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。
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(六) 词无定译
例子：
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or " ]/ o1 Q- k0 r# `2 j5 E7 J" I7 ?
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, 1 R8 M8 D1 Y1 u. Y& I6 e7 ?+ e
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions. & Y. p+ w3 F1 v- R- P# j
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。

(七) 精炼译词 * t$ ^9 D4 |$ J3 H" F3 O
例子：
A new dignity crept into his walk.
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。 ! \. R/ J* r" s3 p  C( r
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。 - d, e6 C; y3 }( U$ K6 E# D! |
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(八) 删削"When"字
例子：
1. When he saw me, he was startled.
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......)
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the , ~7 F* h: E! [6 [. i2 V
head, and knocking on them round?"
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)

(九) 感叹词的不同译法 3 ?+ t. C. n7 R1 I
例子： 7 S7 c9 ?6 X% h4 o
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
them!"
"Why, Eva, your room is full now." $ \7 I, T7 w" H5 s+ f
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 $ u6 J4 L' Y( M( F! z7 P
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」 4 D% O4 w9 a4 s
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?"
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」 $ I% U% x# \4 g) o
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.")
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to 3 X! i( E: t" R' k
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
jocularly; ... # D' W$ y/ d; S% y  D
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy 2 e! _" d7 v" ~: r7 o
interval of silence. 5 ?- e, t/ u% M! B; z( Z& U" z- @% X
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) 0 K; C  T7 t, B. U
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。

(十) 顺拆法
例子：
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors. 1 _& I+ C) U! w, w2 h
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 3 _' [& ]  y$ ^7 s
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。
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(十一) 倒拆法 / w3 \* Y, F* Y6 H; N2 P4 g
例子： $ A; x$ L1 _, m# l4 h. _. ^) G  J
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute / * y/ H1 D& e' v5 [- {% w! @
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。
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(十二) 抽词拆句法
例子： " @) ^, F' J, x, k! @
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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