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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网
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(一) 同义反译法
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」) 9 J: v9 {5 b/ ^% N6 C" Q+ S
2. I'll be here for good this time. + J( K; W7 r+ `4 v. [, W  G3 F2 z
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) * }- Z, B% m, w! V: x- R
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) 9 E2 m$ Q0 N) Y/ [1 r7 q
4. "Wait, he is serious." % f9 |# s# I' r3 V! s  z. Z1 S
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) - K) F0 V! C# H
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) 8 V1 S+ V3 h/ c0 z8 v
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(二) 删减解释词
例子：
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a 6 m+ J1 N  d6 g+ V0 ~
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women. + G% p) V) p2 x2 S+ P
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。

(三) 短句拆译 6 Y; A. p1 b6 ^1 q. r9 C
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" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..." : ~) o: u- g/ b1 p
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」

(四) 译词推陈出新 * y. W+ |  w) t% s4 S, i0 K0 b- N
例子：
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with 0 b0 H2 i& z. q
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a 7 k; s! K, T; d2 W( j% `; R" `2 l( [$ @0 ]
lower.
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 - ]1 j0 v! M- i1 ]: o- s2 F
原词原译改译 # @4 A* e. {9 q5 ], y

when 当......的时候等到......的时候 5 n( ]' _! C' H- `4 }6 l  H/ f
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act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求

a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人 ) b- I$ F" Z9 J& x) P4 A
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 ( s! `' G) n4 I4 G9 o: p
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了- @* ?" P# S% e7 i& V7 i. g

(五) 解释性添词
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"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I 5 i6 B# P) Y2 w3 |9 u8 \6 r
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet ! d- _' j2 I0 A" o/ {
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。
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(六) 词无定译 2 l2 h7 g9 Y  d' z( S$ ^2 k: g
例子：
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or 3 q- ]4 h8 ~: T- z0 _8 V
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, # J+ @' y3 ^* }0 L8 `. ^( P
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions. 2 H1 m, D- E5 A0 H' d3 `  ^  ?( A* S# L
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。7 J. G- ?5 E- F) }. H
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(七) 精炼译词
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A new dignity crept into his walk. ( a# u. F: _# p9 J8 J7 J
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。 7 }; H+ M2 O( B# Q3 F
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。
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(八) 删削"When"字 , B2 e+ t( ^2 Z9 Y. r5 G$ k4 `0 \
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1. When he saw me, he was startled.
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) ' d2 Q2 t; a9 [5 c, _
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the 1 V6 \) x4 M2 n
head, and knocking on them round?"
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......) 3 c8 O0 A& ^0 F8 R# Y: [9 k% b& H9 M

(九) 感叹词的不同译法 . b; u' M1 ^0 j: \- o+ j
例子： 3 R; y* m* F! B/ m
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
them!"
"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 . r. b; s" \8 K2 i& S: s- t
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」 ! j# Y! Y* R( }1 B* o7 Y
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" ! o6 }1 B% |% A
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」 : S: @! A. u  j% ?5 b! y  k
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.")   s- @7 A5 M' P5 c) {* @1 U
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to 4 A' v" W& G8 C. ]% A  v) Y' E9 P: G. v
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader, 7 i& A  G6 I8 c7 b$ l1 ]2 ~$ M
jocularly; ...
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
interval of silence.
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) 4 P: c2 x! j% N2 a, H6 Q: i
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。

(十) 顺拆法 ) p  o; P9 w- p( m8 Y) A" [- Y" z2 R" j
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His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors.
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 6 j4 m0 M% G  L. q3 R
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。
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(十一) 倒拆法 ! y% e# T7 w3 s
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To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute / 9 |8 u. @/ }/ ?4 c" C) k3 [! t0 f
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his ! p/ g; P. d, B
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。 " x5 p! n7 h; l! Y3 ~

(十二) 抽词拆句法 4 T' a+ I! s8 ]3 d
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the 4 v* E) L/ J! Y: P4 e
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. - S, i* Q' t# C& P8 Y! k
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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