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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网) \+ O6 w- y# r5 t$ L5 \
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(一) 同义反译法 " @( r7 v5 W- C( p
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar. " G$ |( |- u9 ^
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
2. I'll be here for good this time.
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」)
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) 8 G4 v" W# z$ r3 |1 }
4. "Wait, he is serious." " X. ]6 C) t; m! E0 ^% N, o# U3 w
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」)
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) + V7 s& A/ S0 U0 N
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(二) 删减解释词 $ ^( `8 E6 {" u( ?, C! w/ k
例子： . D4 `6 ]9 O* x4 y9 _  h
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a , Z& _) @+ |9 d! U+ [/ Z$ m2 Q
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。) M2 A* R! @) F
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(三) 短句拆译 0 c4 p+ n8 x6 |; j# r- u  C
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..." & _% O8 L  s9 R6 Z
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」

(四) 译词推陈出新 / O4 Q7 _4 X! b/ `4 E- p8 v+ V
例子：
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with 7 ~! q  `- P9 t& q: j
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
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原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。
原词原译改译

when 当......的时候等到......的时候

act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求 * D( z6 P! d5 A
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a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人

ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 2 P/ f% B8 y  s& k& j. E
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了0 [1 I/ ?; x7 g# O' o

(五) 解释性添词 ; v1 _4 M& a* ?) A* _0 j* t" N
例子：
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet. - c1 o8 W! L- Y9 n
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。 ! E9 V! ^. a2 y2 s
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(六) 词无定译 ( u# t' |. d1 K& C
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It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or : N7 v  O: ^/ R1 b1 Q: d% t2 j
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later,
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous ' \, f0 ~" y; `% I& a! m
conditions. $ x' S; _- ^% z) {  y: W  p3 I
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。
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(七) 精炼译词 ( S  J. A: K2 h3 j1 G! _
例子：
A new dignity crept into his walk. - `; A- I0 n$ z% E& Z, ~
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。 1 h, Y! v3 Q8 o3 E7 m1 G; Z* G/ N
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。 6 Q( m) M5 S' b$ h0 G7 x" n) c
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(八) 删削"When"字 ( L; x9 j0 g1 B, h$ R7 H
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1. When he saw me, he was startled. % o) l6 C- O2 J, x& r0 K
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......)
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the
head, and knocking on them round?" & K) W* D$ m7 j
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)
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(九) 感叹词的不同译法 ! g4 Q- r( u" _  U9 a% I
例子：
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
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"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」 0 ?  z; Z- {' @9 C& Z8 v
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" * u: X7 R4 P2 n* q) X
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") ! k1 g& Q( o; |& d6 D- F
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
jocularly; ...
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy 2 I2 I, J, }( h( T' R0 |% j
interval of silence.
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) / h" Z  V7 R* g' y9 R9 E
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；...... 1 s/ }/ p0 h  t5 j' K# q
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 * f+ f( ?1 S# E% T

(十) 顺拆法
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His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue   }- n2 Y" K, p7 Z3 I
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors.   h9 E- O1 v* s" q/ d( O: ^4 ^% z5 x
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。 $ j' |6 `3 c& H! @7 r% F

(十一) 倒拆法
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To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。

(十二) 抽词拆句法
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the # \* o  d3 f8 r9 `* M
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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