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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网

(一) 同义反译法
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」) " y0 @, v" n; ^2 ?
2. I'll be here for good this time. ) D( S7 w8 N# n6 o
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) 3 o0 x0 c$ q& W3 j! ?; n+ K: p
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out. . j6 Q6 m& s: _# [% x7 u7 `; M
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」)
4. "Wait, he is serious."
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」)
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!" 4 d9 s5 ~1 l9 A! }# [0 w
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」)

(二) 删减解释词
例子：
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。% U: \- W8 F9 {$ N: q- T6 [2 M3 W( Q! w

(三) 短句拆译 ( q: T5 ]$ I; N. ?
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..." 3 E7 D- |7 B1 J
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」 4 w2 c  x1 N! Z
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(四) 译词推陈出新
例子：
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with % ~9 h4 g3 i* G. s: W2 r; f! m; y
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a " q1 _: W# c. E- \# [$ u* r
lower. ! }" D# s0 ~# y
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。 7 j+ \3 s/ r; X2 t% w
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。
原词原译改译 ; M  @3 W  S4 p% ]( N8 Y, l0 x
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when 当......的时候等到......的时候 1 ^& {  t) s0 [$ @
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act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求
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a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人

ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理

in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了

(五) 解释性添词 ! Z2 [% C: k8 B- Z& x# n
例子：
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I 6 t  \2 P0 G0 L  G0 _+ {2 c
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet ( e" x& K5 X6 J% x/ G! b
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet. 2 K1 Z- f6 C  y3 ^# t- g) Z
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。

(六) 词无定译 / h; X5 q6 P4 l6 w
例子： 3 Y8 v; ?4 b6 {, w* ]; G, @
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, ) ]$ W3 q5 ^4 R" }4 N6 A6 W
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous , ]: ~2 K6 N* d* T
conditions.
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。

(七) 精炼译词
例子： , }2 X7 [( J1 m$ {% F$ l8 S! y
A new dignity crept into his walk. , f/ \2 k  [. s! r0 F
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。 ( H# x( {! ?3 _: q6 }" T( p

(八) 删削"When"字 6 u, J. M) `1 F8 }, }' Z& S
例子：& @3 V% h! g0 i8 f/ ?
1. When he saw me, he was startled.
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......)
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the . S5 r4 C9 a" o  @5 T
head, and knocking on them round?" 5 d; l: w, h  A2 _/ [$ ?
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......) 4 X( O9 A$ W  m$ r* K
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(九) 感叹词的不同译法
例子：
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
them!" ; S' ?1 }+ ~! \* y0 i, D
"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 / d4 x, T# D# ~* {# A
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" 4 k$ y8 P# t! g1 g
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") 0 t9 ~# Y* n; }' j  @
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
jocularly; ...
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy ' T( N8 w, }. Z/ {6 }5 [7 c. F
interval of silence. - b0 |) g4 l- ?4 D0 `. M
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) ; ^3 o) A) h( t4 K
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 , J2 K% ?1 h$ R" g: [: `) H5 z* C

(十) 顺拆法 . {; d" o7 B* m& ]; C  }
例子：
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue ( k5 W, J9 H. B( x
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors. 5 _- X$ m( G1 q2 r6 f4 u, F
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。
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(十一) 倒拆法 $ M* D' G. _! e' Z$ y/ w7 ~
例子： 7 i# {8 O+ X$ _- L& o
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute / ) x% x: A5 ^( c6 f( s
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his ; i; G, r0 {8 Z
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。 3 g3 n- l$ F, o- d5 o+ y  s# |# I
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(十二) 抽词拆句法
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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