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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网, M6 @& x' p' k& v# r
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(一) 同义反译法 4 H* j, X5 z0 J( ]& Z( f+ V
例子： $ }1 x/ w3 s' }* `- r  y5 f! I
1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
2. I'll be here for good this time. 5 I  B- A  L' I  ?
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) 6 @" o$ M! F- V: h3 O% Z+ y
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.   a, l4 j& r0 m+ y  y; B& ]
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」)
4. "Wait, he is serious." % ?9 Z' {; D6 a% c
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) # `  W! T3 N( N
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!" + B& K2 K: j& W* p; H5 P
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」)

(二) 删减解释词
例子：
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of 7 F: l9 P0 |6 R7 l. W* W5 E
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。8 S" M: L8 W4 l+ Y

(三) 短句拆译 / I% S0 g8 O; `, |& n
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" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..." 3 ]$ C$ D7 |8 _/ b6 W
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」
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(四) 译词推陈出新
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When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with ' T# L; ?9 ?3 y. P/ W
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a 7 h: o1 R0 q$ p; y) c* ]3 w
lower.
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 1 b8 o( W& I( J$ t
原词原译改译 ) G% w3 t4 s' |6 J; Z

when 当......的时候等到......的时候
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act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求

a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了
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(五) 解释性添词 ; G7 H. |" v6 i+ a/ D& P( s$ k8 T
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"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have 3 |) ?- q1 l/ ?* x) F
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I % D( I# Y$ P; A% D6 f1 X
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet . r1 E2 S9 U4 Z
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet. " G3 @8 M) k7 U, @
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。
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(六) 词无定译
例子：
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, ) w' V" h- G% {7 k# Z. [
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions.
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。$ ?$ Q- a" l; B, ~* @8 w. i
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(七) 精炼译词 $ q, ?3 x9 p/ W: h, a# t
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A new dignity crept into his walk. " i$ y, n& ], F& b% Z4 K. k5 l
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。 1 h' F, i. y' b$ L) \9 _5 g3 N6 ?

(八) 删削"When"字 & c- U4 @& v( x) @/ x6 ]
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1. When he saw me, he was startled.
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) , L  H7 ~+ V. \/ i) a6 J3 Y4 |, z8 g
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the
head, and knocking on them round?"
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......) ; [( `0 V( O6 e7 D- }0 s
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(九) 感叹词的不同译法
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1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
them!"
"Why, Eva, your room is full now." & n; [) q: e/ c7 o
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 3 @& q# K* d1 W( Y6 |
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?"   ?' Z# f4 A" x" v2 H9 I
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") $ T- O+ ~/ Z9 ^$ ^& L4 {
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to ' I$ K" _# u. `- ~3 d1 K
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
jocularly; ... - j- k. r! B+ b& ~8 |- g
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy 9 n+ r2 n. x7 V  w
interval of silence.
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) ' U5 N2 V, H. n9 C' x  U3 H7 d
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 2 O$ X: Q  f* V
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(十) 顺拆法
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His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors.
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 , {& Q5 I* }) S- J
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。

(十一) 倒拆法
例子：
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon. : f9 O; [4 A3 G' \3 l7 p
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。
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(十二) 抽词拆句法
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. ' D$ B. E( U: `0 r' c1 T
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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