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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网( K( d4 x! u) I/ e: L

(一) 同义反译法
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1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
2. I'll be here for good this time.
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」)
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out. 7 b, ?8 w/ _+ K# b
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」)
4. "Wait, he is serious."
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) 2 {- m5 @0 L3 B3 P
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!" / s/ r  I6 B3 _9 L
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) 3 E3 `( i" [5 z' B
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(二) 删减解释词 $ w% x0 u/ \4 l1 A% @
例子： 3 Y: ~* n( _* B+ a
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a . I1 s8 g) N* C2 y1 I
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。
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(三) 短句拆译
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」 0 W+ {' c9 D  @4 J+ c/ a8 _& l
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(四) 译词推陈出新 % I% [" F! o/ f/ @4 U0 a
例子： 3 `3 |/ o( G5 f5 v4 a
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a - e1 s8 F& o7 N8 n' k
lower. 2 R5 @  C" i3 J4 P
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。 0 m: T9 W! L% z$ l5 W
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 . ?0 s7 c6 c( J* P+ K: L
原词原译改译 / [$ P0 F1 `( Z/ S% u! a6 z9 g

when 当......的时候等到......的时候
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act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求

a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人

ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 $ Q4 A4 ]. }/ {! T
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了

(五) 解释性添词
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"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have 1 C! T: p! n' R
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I # U( d  F6 W+ c" o
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet ! o: d6 a. R3 C
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet. ' Z8 F) F# {% A# a  C5 K
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。

(六) 词无定译
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It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or 8 W9 h2 [  m# m! I1 L
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, : v: n+ d3 L' r; z$ N! M
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions.
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。  r5 y  T) I/ }( x
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(七) 精炼译词 & a& m4 k# ~, p1 q" D
例子：
A new dignity crept into his walk.
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。
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(八) 删削"When"字 & V/ E+ ^' c* E) X( N
例子：
1. When he saw me, he was startled. 2 [  e& W4 H2 j! D1 O& ?
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) ) n& @  z0 m# ~  o8 o# w& v* q
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the ( n2 z* k/ r  [
head, and knocking on them round?"
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)

(九) 感叹词的不同译法 & z5 ^, ]" s# Y/ E. ^4 d; z
例子：
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
them!" 3 R5 E1 g, d. |; q6 e
"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」 . u4 H& a7 X8 I: f
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" 0 \) p0 O7 r4 n' Q& w  D0 K% G. p
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.")
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
jocularly; ... . E4 O  N) H" o2 u1 |
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy . N- C' H7 T% q' R6 d6 M
interval of silence.
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」)
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；...... + A9 g$ y- W6 C+ U: B6 R0 @
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。

(十) 顺拆法
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His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors.
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。 ( l# |: n+ I* {- v* u

(十一) 倒拆法 % Y) H# ]( d. J: w8 G5 P- Q
例子：
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute / 3 C; c) m7 A6 [. x
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon. 4 w# j9 Q' T6 l! v- b( w% |. u
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。
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(十二) 抽词拆句法 1 {1 s  }# a5 w/ |4 ]0 Y
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the   H. x* x" J5 i& P  q
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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