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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网
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(一) 同义反译法 1 ?) k% W; T' A% A
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
2. I'll be here for good this time.
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」)
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) ! W" R  Q( K9 w8 ^
4. "Wait, he is serious." 3 @4 b6 V6 ?* W# }/ U
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」)
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」)
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(二) 删减解释词 7 e2 T) a8 y/ g
例子：
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women. : X  K2 q  N7 w8 v/ @; w. E7 w# U! c3 J
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。
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(三) 短句拆译
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..." * ]6 N! e0 {* Z, `" f! ?/ I
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」

(四) 译词推陈出新
例子：
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a   E4 b; F+ y( s  J- }; W: f, x2 t
lower.
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。 4 J( j$ @; X( u9 M' G0 a) x
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。
原词原译改译

when 当......的时候等到......的时候

act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求
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a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人 ' S- P( y* e0 q4 O$ j3 m, \0 G0 |
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 7 _4 y2 g2 F# c# o6 L
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了4 J( Y: @5 ?3 f5 v: {* F5 z

(五) 解释性添词
例子：
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have ( V( d$ L4 M2 A6 ~
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I 4 E. d) H, ^7 a" K) c( g+ t
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。 & g$ z, U  H9 m
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(六) 词无定译
例子： / {) _1 H: M5 }, u( c. P+ U1 @
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or 9 K" k$ H9 E% ~
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later,
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous / I& X& c1 \, z! k) M& |
conditions.
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。, M- \/ q) V) r6 W- X8 c

(七) 精炼译词
例子：
A new dignity crept into his walk.   a* ~0 J( ~# j# P+ }
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。 6 {5 ^8 o4 a* l/ D# @' n" f
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(八) 删削"When"字 , M& {8 Q* x/ E) l- ^+ ?
例子：
1. When he saw me, he was startled.
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) " v8 r9 |: G3 r
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the
head, and knocking on them round?" ! ?* E5 m% e+ f8 D* L* U# l4 |
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......) ; V: @- X: \" ]* W" G
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(九) 感叹词的不同译法
例子： - G( R! h# a( r3 _- e
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
them!" * w( N" R7 c1 E- u5 r, @0 c3 V0 s
"Why, Eva, your room is full now." ( U7 k* _* y, x% |3 K& l( ^
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」 ( u- N7 P; p! P" X( f  A$ z
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" - L$ }0 y" y# g; \. ^
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") % W2 q, P0 U0 A1 k5 D+ ]1 E
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to $ `! R- t" ]5 A4 w. P
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
jocularly; ...
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
interval of silence. 2 o4 y& @0 j. Z2 A$ K
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」)
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；...... + D2 X8 x( u2 C( ^1 `7 M  T% j' _
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。

(十) 顺拆法
例子：
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue ; y7 \* G$ k, Q+ v
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors.
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。

(十一) 倒拆法
例子：
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon. . j: [6 i7 [3 T9 d
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。 ' d; }  t( Y# L: U& i9 n/ j0 P

(十二) 抽词拆句法
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the 3 Z. P5 s( i) w7 r2 K. `
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of , Y! K) k# Q$ F# v) t
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. # O( F0 L  _+ v4 E7 v
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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