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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网
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(一) 同义反译法 ) b! Y) N0 N# y8 Y. }& _
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」) 6 x% @0 D( p. x* M
2. I'll be here for good this time.
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」)
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」)
4. "Wait, he is serious." , `' j% |: U" ~, ]0 O4 }- |( S
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) : n7 f( _0 g  x' r; W5 ~6 ^. y
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!" * L& H& O' V' y+ K
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) 9 }5 @7 j: l: ^5 Z4 ]; p+ ^
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(二) 删减解释词
例子： ) ]9 }3 z3 w2 Z( w
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women. 9 q$ i1 k0 Z$ u1 H( r
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。* F# w, A0 n6 G; {

(三) 短句拆译
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」 # R3 Y- m  O2 w/ K

(四) 译词推陈出新 $ P2 `* X8 x( a  I- {
例子： ( a+ }6 }- l4 C* b" [0 H
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with & o& F0 V2 [: q* D0 m
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
lower. 3 \: P; h: b" T2 O
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 + r+ P! E& o. T
原词原译改译
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when 当......的时候等到......的时候 5 l& t% f' K8 _6 V
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act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求 ; o0 f6 F1 R# F9 N; B3 F8 o

a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人 7 s+ T5 Y- {" p4 G
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 * y' \, {' l5 l0 Y
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了

(五) 解释性添词 8 f/ q$ f, B1 b6 X( B5 |
例子：
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have 4 F; g. v7 a. B" K# C1 J. h
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I " Y; x- @" L2 {) ?: Z5 y
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。
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(六) 词无定译 : t" A5 ~: _! Y' B8 @, m3 l
例子： " W: T1 X: r# H+ _: _
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, + P5 @7 b7 I7 g* I& b% f* ]1 Y
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions.
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。2 s  l  Y, e9 N# i: y7 x0 p
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(七) 精炼译词 ! ?+ f* y6 r2 _% V5 I6 B: L
例子：
A new dignity crept into his walk.
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。 # {4 S- h% `% `- W* N6 A
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。
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(八) 删削"When"字 " W' E! ^2 V/ i' J  n
例子：
1. When he saw me, he was startled.
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) % p. [' L: a, T( U
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the 4 Q3 |% m0 Y9 s+ C$ S
head, and knocking on them round?" 3 V: ]7 b) R- |' D
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)
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(九) 感叹词的不同译法
例子：
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want . W4 J( @$ B% N% o- L
them!" + E5 w, Z: b. c# q: {8 f- C
"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 # F# z6 [* D- ^
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」 + `0 W9 k1 B0 z' _
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?"
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") - u7 c) M* f4 V0 l5 \! }) T9 v
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to : {# x$ q' Z* O! m; U4 \: G
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader, : }# c: t/ s/ a2 Q& V
jocularly; ...
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
interval of silence.
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) ' O) d2 u3 F, A; t% O7 M
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；...... # P# l5 d  i8 m) c% v
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。

(十) 顺拆法 3 O) E8 Q7 Q# f, O
例子：
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue / ^% S1 r: J  I! l, }5 T
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors.
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 0 i/ `- T( `3 o/ L$ h8 ]5 Y  A, Z& ^
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。

(十一) 倒拆法
例子： * J* ^+ y( V, H% L9 u' A
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his ! M. L. s' M6 U4 ?" x$ J" m
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。 % J3 E* ~5 v4 s2 Q0 \9 ^
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(十二) 抽词拆句法
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the / d: Z$ T1 K4 _$ a
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of 8 K0 e+ j8 q  u* I) P
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. " I0 w7 p- N# _: H8 g* z6 Y$ T+ P% q
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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