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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网

(一) 同义反译法
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar. ( _7 m$ U3 s& E. p
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」) 0 y. I+ C, r) I9 O
2. I'll be here for good this time. 3 ?7 C7 ^% W* x- g# ~, F
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) $ V- h1 X2 I( E# h
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out. - z  W5 t6 R6 e, x- F% N
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) : g' e# Y+ F5 I" V  |
4. "Wait, he is serious." $ `/ E& w2 u3 y* y) t
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) ) v6 I5 S  }1 r+ A( C
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) & g% P4 ^8 ]! f9 _5 t1 D# h7 A
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(二) 删减解释词 # O: k+ C7 Q8 H
例子： 6 G) ^; y* H! g" G( m; P
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of & J2 ]4 {* I% ^) R1 ]0 x
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a ; x- u& k9 g! i9 r  p1 U$ \
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women. 8 X- D0 K. C$ M; f8 A% o
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。' i0 Y$ i) W2 r% Z$ _/ f

(三) 短句拆译
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..." 3 A* \( W: m( o( m0 G# l8 Z; [
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」

(四) 译词推陈出新
例子：
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
lower.
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。 ' `/ J9 _( A" X8 W+ C) \1 W
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 ) f6 l' ~4 u4 f: T
原词原译改译

when 当......的时候等到......的时候 5 F  _1 M- Q2 f3 ^- w" f( v+ U
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act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求 % u0 J$ d' ~/ p) A$ K( S6 c6 n
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a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人 8 F# @; V* f8 @, l4 X, q- g9 I% d% P

ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 ' |" D& Q% R1 {% r- c2 u0 b2 S3 b  _2 a

in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了! C  h: _2 L) B5 K- Q

(五) 解释性添词
例子：
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have . s' w2 J; g: D9 g8 @
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。 / f0 b! G& \! N& E6 {, A
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(六) 词无定译
例子：
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or & N! T3 H6 U9 X' S& g: Q2 }
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later,
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous ; X8 O' L5 N4 b) p+ {
conditions. % o1 ]9 C/ F! o+ S8 `) K" X
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。  u' e+ ?+ T7 r  P0 B

(七) 精炼译词 ) n. ]( o* Q: n) r( o4 C7 ]7 a. g
例子：
A new dignity crept into his walk. 8 d' l4 D; ]- p0 G$ g
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。 2 \8 [! a$ u. K9 `, {  m
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。
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(八) 删削"When"字
例子：# U6 M1 s# N* x, {
1. When he saw me, he was startled. 1 K" `3 a/ `" z; [/ ~: V5 ~
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......)
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the
head, and knocking on them round?"
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)

(九) 感叹词的不同译法 0 a# L6 M* Z% f/ N% [5 g
例子：
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want 9 |3 S5 z+ m7 S& Q
them!" & d* }" y8 T+ x& x7 v  q
"Why, Eva, your room is full now." + H4 c1 z% |( a
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」 ) @" Q% j& K, D: B: b; d
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?"
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") ; J8 p0 A1 N* H
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader, . c6 k8 l+ a( P6 N' @+ N6 s3 ?. G
jocularly; ... ; J% p! R: Y% V- r6 x
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
interval of silence. , H" J+ S0 `* E# R" Y
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) 0 N: T/ x( f% x# I9 j% Y
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。

(十) 顺拆法
例子：
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors. 7 i. Z! k$ H* f2 @) U0 G
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。 0 G  i8 z$ y5 r% d

(十一) 倒拆法
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To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon.   s( `+ N# ~7 Q# u
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。 6 [  l2 y7 I. C+ y

(十二) 抽词拆句法 & ^, x0 e9 B+ j, N$ J: p
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. ( r: Y. {& l- e  C# E
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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