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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网" x; [& B& j6 o( a3 @) X, n8 w7 X

(一) 同义反译法 + K# ]0 A! p% [1 }& l  {
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」) 7 h) _- @3 z& m; d3 ?
2. I'll be here for good this time. ! B& T6 i8 l0 I% ]
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」)
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」)
4. "Wait, he is serious." / Q+ M" L- p+ K0 T5 t4 J# W) o
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」)
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!" - |/ t- o8 V' S
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」)

(二) 删减解释词
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The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of , z+ l5 l* a' K: C- I% A
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a " f( T' \2 W: X9 p% C& d" ^
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。5 X! ^+ E' l, j0 l3 A1 U
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(三) 短句拆译 ) X+ d( q* X/ Z1 A6 a
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」 # `) {! D! }. k1 [+ e

(四) 译词推陈出新 " _2 N! [" Z+ s! u
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When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with 8 _: y- d; Y9 n' I9 N: J
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
lower. & Z: v8 r* q  ?  {; Y" _
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 / h- K! a1 `# _
原词原译改译
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when 当......的时候等到......的时候 : n3 Q8 V* {7 Z# E# |

act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求

a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 ; x3 d$ K* P8 `0 s; w) o
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in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了
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(五) 解释性添词
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"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet 9 q) e5 `- K# V- K
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。

(六) 词无定译
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It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, " Q* z& s, J1 k) P( L8 m9 Y
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous 7 A3 b" w- c* v" {
conditions. # T4 J# N1 s9 m/ }  C- v) I; D) b
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。

(七) 精炼译词
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A new dignity crept into his walk.
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。 5 g* Y; [1 I3 }9 F' ?; N/ F
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(八) 删削"When"字
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1. When he saw me, he was startled. - u3 E# J5 \! }& ?, ?) V* ?5 P' |
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......)
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the
head, and knocking on them round?" 5 D2 u/ v9 a: O
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)

(九) 感叹词的不同译法 ) y# K5 p, P7 C$ T4 b1 E. ]* P
例子：
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want 5 d" J; l9 j- L
them!"
"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 " Z7 O0 t4 b5 M7 C
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」 2 T. _; L- Q: A) F; V7 _
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" $ ~% `$ \' B1 N( w7 X
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」 " o6 Q* c; N7 s
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.")
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
jocularly; ... . Q# V: s% A  O7 T& M3 u
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy : M+ c" @# X; K7 {* Z  Y3 a
interval of silence. 9 _, b# n+ }% k
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) / F% [/ `5 \! O7 f' h: \+ a, p. u+ D
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 - a+ D* B. D+ G! Y
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(十) 顺拆法 # Q" U* w9 D7 M5 S- \, ~
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His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue $ o' ?- H! _' u  y$ Q: z/ L9 P
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic, * w' H$ Y, W3 S
social and demographic factors. + @/ }: |! M% }! C. z: D
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。 ' @4 `9 o/ D8 D' \. s

(十一) 倒拆法 ! |& T1 `* v" E4 ?
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To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute / & ?+ Y. t4 g0 m7 v5 @
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。 * _* G3 r4 F/ K# ?. d. m; b  S
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(十二) 抽词拆句法 ; M+ r% C8 D. o) J6 q( \# \
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of . P; _: w- j9 p4 u2 b4 q  N7 d
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. " B( u6 a$ p8 r( L5 i
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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