|
 
- 帖子
- 136
- 积分
- 7858
- 威望
- 0 金
- 金币
- 282 元
- 来自
- 北京
- 注册时间
- 2007-9-6
- 最后登录
- 2021-2-19
|
作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网* N9 B* i7 `1 y7 w. l# u) S G7 a
) g$ ?2 t7 F* S4 y. I0 Y(一) 同义反译法
: I; R* l f: w: N! ]例子： 6 s; u: c+ v* N7 `+ {: q
1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
+ `+ L( Q& _: W- d( ~$ ]/ X+ Y. H酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
" }; H% D- e) _$ q0 \5 @' V2. I'll be here for good this time. 2 M9 w6 V0 M, U$ ` O9 P
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」)
7 |: C- a0 ]! r6 @/ I3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out. 8 r! D4 v$ G+ t, M ?5 m/ r
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) ' M2 K" c9 C1 P
4. "Wait, he is serious." 9 V& k$ F0 I- h' K' o: U+ Q
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」) / o' ]/ A- j2 }$ U6 M: t
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
% \) n9 a9 U+ ^' a' m「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」)
# o$ ]$ e; v2 P; P* W2 D- ]: g/ d* q
/ O1 C) r6 v. v8 {(二) 删减解释词 , L3 _* `0 L# Z: d3 D6 H
例子：
! X2 S$ Y: I' l% v9 `3 oThe traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of 9 b+ O# b7 W/ I' B, J0 Q
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a
5 ^9 ^6 d& x* N6 G: xparticular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
, s$ v" U: L1 k2 y7 x% y3 A$ H到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。
8 L ?% W- Y) x! l! m
( u. w, r" f' |" Y- }+ L' z(三) 短句拆译
7 g; ]: s3 d: b# U$ P# W例子： 0 c4 i/ K# d( Z# Z1 h$ A, r
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
2 D9 d2 P6 I/ t4 N「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」
$ @0 h8 \8 h7 h/ I. ]! V( T
6 F6 t/ L* H# B8 v5 m6 g(四) 译词推陈出新 ) i& n d( U6 E
例子： 0 |1 \1 ?9 n F9 ^" e- F i
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
f& W3 m8 D V" k. V, y5 J* tdoubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a $ l& E, c/ ?1 c4 e
lower.
4 h x* b/ f3 X4 ~1 h原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
8 Y2 n4 x) g0 }& A* v; j! T: i/ P改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。
9 C7 n$ A0 P% T' a6 M% Y原词 原译 改译 # h! Z0 e I7 D1 a! z
1 N& b+ T, c0 f2 L K
when 当......的时候 等到......的时候
?% s2 W. z$ U& _% Q% ^5 T) Y: I4 L5 a7 \) |
act with boldness 大胆行动 放胆去追求 9 P- f/ M. \! s9 z
, O% c+ U" ^9 ~) v% I$ ?' la lover 一个情人 一般堕入情网的人 - ~2 Z9 d1 }6 g! q( |
, o5 v1 T* E6 }" K) {
ordinary fears 普通的害怕 种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 4 m* \" R( n: a. y
' n9 j" `1 F) ]& b# n# `in addition to 除了......之外 那就更是难免的了
/ G! p: R' | H1 Y- d3 z
6 _# W5 `- d! U6 E5 h/ h$ ?/ Y(五) 解释性添词 , |5 J# t7 {. W- R4 U& o
例子：
2 U7 p5 l$ d- |"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have
4 b# {2 O T5 M# j# e- E/ idone it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
5 @6 E' z H; T; Qnever thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
" {( }* [" A3 U$ C% L" l& [3 land the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
$ U, A) d$ d5 o+ r「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。
! i0 K, [" V* q1 \0 U$ }& i4 g" l; ?) o# c8 O' l' U: M
(六) 词无定译 9 Q- \. ?: d4 y% G8 A
例子： 7 e% t( a6 p2 J% n+ F9 K
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or ! `! j# ~. S, ]* w t
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, ; s m P' D' }" p
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
/ [7 _4 f: W0 `. g; @conditions. : u' D" O0 s' M- s( y1 X
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。) C; [0 Z6 L" s! M3 P
& t6 H+ _9 s, i(七) 精炼译词 : D: M" s/ m) a# o9 @
例子：
2 Y1 F8 w, G' Z3 K$ `+ ?7 S# E# [A new dignity crept into his walk.
4 I9 a; r, d2 _1 R2 C. M: o F原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
, n9 B8 f% K1 P' t' ?8 x# S改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。 ; p# K d, x1 J6 m) U2 W4 c9 L
. \ b6 y3 ~% D7 M0 m8 d/ ^
(八) 删削"When"字
6 m9 j% e& s* Z6 d/ L* J例子：
x8 m( B0 ?: g1. When he saw me, he was startled. 8 f6 b+ W6 z4 E2 a
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......)
2 e- f; }3 y o+ }- M7 Q5 b- H2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the
$ }7 I9 D$ q, D/ x% F' V6 hhead, and knocking on them round?"
. m' s3 J3 m) e8 E) d+ G+ a Q「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......) & u- n6 U2 ~' b q+ `$ i
5 D. \& b" ^3 l! O" t
(九) 感叹词的不同译法
* i( B# K( _& o! ^. ?* _6 X' E( z例子：
7 E% `4 h! l3 _7 o- p& D1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
( T; D" A+ }+ l+ kthem!"
6 B9 [ S0 K6 a7 _, O: _, a* t"Why, Eva, your room is full now." + V, @1 F4 m' f: h3 L( w
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 7 d1 V* Z+ M+ X7 l8 Z0 Y Y
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
# C [% Y4 K7 s- D: k2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?"
# e9 l7 q/ h6 i5 u& A$ b「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
- W! Z9 n* z% a, S# p$ S' w3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") m; u" K& D7 @( u3 Z
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to
* [" T- t8 D. nkeep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
n$ N5 t1 R& |1 Y9 ^& ?1 njocularly; ...
/ Q9 L+ `- M5 W"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
! r2 N: F2 j8 I6 finterval of silence. - g9 Z$ k- K3 `3 K9 N
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」)
4 Y8 }$ z! R, O( p% h% c- J9 Z3 h; W" c7 b「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
; V+ d) F" l* b R3 f/ Z「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 - y) b x! y$ d4 P5 C
3 H2 u* j2 `- G; x- P, b) B(十) 顺拆法
+ z7 m: a$ [3 q1 w& m例子： 7 |; W! W3 |- I& p+ z
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
6 a! k9 p$ \8 d8 y2 Y' P! p$ Y1 aworking/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic, - q& o# T7 v" F5 t
social and demographic factors.
" N8 e! u2 X6 l/ e. k: \- z( o原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。
9 }! Y$ k5 t. U& r8 M9 l改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。
/ w: f7 r6 J0 ?' V7 i; i2 d2 Q; h- Y b4 S. E/ H1 L
(十一) 倒拆法
7 ^) v0 H$ m* \ H3 ~例子： ( x4 ?( D2 G2 X* O' t6 a
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
- d% J) L% x! O, G. W( Sfor the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his 8 z# L" I4 Q- ^' K1 i3 o
supposed conditon. 4 m3 N7 g9 B+ V# P
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。 " A4 g W/ }7 _- }, \. Z
- O$ |) R6 D0 i+ |7 M+ ]6 ?) b(十二) 抽词拆句法
+ h' u7 J+ V" l4 t例子：
: k0 w3 V( p( A, f# l8 Q# |# w6 vAll the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
$ D" i" `" h5 r/ w& A' c! R( N/ Geye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
4 c# {2 |5 M- Q# {$ }7 g7 T. h5 K$ xgrowing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. . Q1 z7 t W2 k( I) J
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。 |
|
发表于 2008-7-16 14:27
|