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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网

(一) 同义反译法
例子：
1. Only three customers remained in the bar. ) w% _1 ]9 e; P4 s! H
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
2. I'll be here for good this time.
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」)
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」) ' u1 \# z  _; _/ e6 S9 A
4. "Wait, he is serious."
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」)
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」)   `/ N5 d! d+ j7 l
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(二) 删减解释词 / }5 _6 j9 o! f' D% [* r5 d  w
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The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。4 B0 u: R5 G" K* B# z2 G2 O

(三) 短句拆译 # H8 }0 w1 @/ _+ ^; l: P& i
例子：
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」
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(四) 译词推陈出新 1 x' v0 T, C( H& Z  h# ^
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When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
lower.
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。 0 A) W$ G5 j; c4 V; u
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 ) Q. Z3 V. U$ X+ A
原词原译改译 $ w* ]; Q' D# B2 c

when 当......的时候等到......的时候 6 e9 V7 R& G* I. d$ Q  K" t
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act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求
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a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人

ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理

in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了

(五) 解释性添词
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"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I 8 f' s) S6 ~  s
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。

(六) 词无定译
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It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or : l% m0 G8 T5 m2 ]
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, " E: W- c4 h, E7 L$ e: ^. O. U' A
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions. - H# U3 I5 K: H  @4 @0 A
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。7 @; o, V2 {3 C# m! z( K

(七) 精炼译词
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A new dignity crept into his walk.
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。 ! r3 x0 j, F) m
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。 7 F* b6 E0 b+ e! K

(八) 删削"When"字 5 P0 f. k  Z9 }' ?5 y
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1. When he saw me, he was startled.
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......) + o0 C% i; N2 I4 z! y
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the
head, and knocking on them round?" 4 k" l* ?8 \/ |& V' \- @- s9 C1 Y
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)

(九) 感叹词的不同译法 ( |( k. s5 C3 [$ V
例子： 3 g: _0 c& o3 U' l& P, n8 H4 Z3 [
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want 4 {6 R! b$ |( {
them!" % u" ?. ^( g( v/ @  t# @' b6 B
"Why, Eva, your room is full now." 0 f$ p& T3 P) b. O9 G' g# g
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 2 i4 |+ f. K; u* K, `" W  w
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?"
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」 & C" V6 v6 A- `* K9 ]6 |8 V$ a
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.")
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to ' |- i1 w5 E# A8 t$ C
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader, * N8 P$ y- t* c% r
jocularly; ... # `, n4 G& h6 }! t2 e' Y! L
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy + o8 z. b# H' A8 i
interval of silence.
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」)
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。

(十) 顺拆法
例子：
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue ! L6 p' [6 g1 w0 |$ t
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors.   u' W) L1 T' @0 b$ w- v9 ~
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 ( q; |( O/ h9 P. ^8 p+ u
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。 0 `# E( |/ n: Q4 _
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(十一) 倒拆法 & K5 K9 a6 U% t
例子：
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute / . B. X4 r, O& K& h+ ?! R5 f
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his - p7 B( B6 y3 E& Z; Q
supposed conditon.
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。
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(十二) 抽词拆句法
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of # o  Q7 l, G1 F/ _
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. 6 A) z- V3 u; k
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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