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作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网
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(一) 同义反译法
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3 e0 Y* p1 R. j; Z4 C% H' {9 _1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
1 Y) s5 Q3 b# R' a* H' t# U酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
) z: _6 P0 z' V e Q2. I'll be here for good this time. / o$ A/ q4 B. e8 V
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) $ G) f0 R* A1 ^+ O' p0 H8 K+ u
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
8 } c( z7 c/ h$ Q我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」)
& y9 d8 x9 J2 v5 F4. "Wait, he is serious."
1 M) t8 d3 G4 X9 ^3 W9 J「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」)
/ |) v2 b1 g' N2 [# ~, z5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!" / m; `# k+ O8 p4 H2 r
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) / ^. h! g7 v% Z! \! i7 J) m
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(二) 删减解释词 4 z/ w7 \. L' N5 b+ v; }
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The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
9 V @, R4 B6 I& A; w; srefinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a
3 m) |8 R! @, f4 }3 H5 }( vparticular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
% h+ P9 k3 }, |5 ?到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。, X4 |% Y) K) v5 G5 s
& x+ _& J" O4 H$ o# ~/ M1 I(三) 短句拆译
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" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..." - k$ x$ w7 {" a
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」
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(四) 译词推陈出新 v2 H& I* D, W* `
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When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with . N5 P3 c8 |6 {9 K
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a 5 E: d* `1 K* M: o
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原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。 : |/ J# E8 M- c6 W7 `& U M3 [
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。
) A; y' \" A) Z6 t2 b+ h( f. j原词 原译 改译
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! W& E2 d: p Pwhen 当......的时候 等到......的时候 " |* f8 P& K! T. @5 M
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act with boldness 大胆行动 放胆去追求
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% L- t" A2 L) S% \1 fa lover 一个情人 一般堕入情网的人
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕 种种常有的提心吊胆的心理 # V, `# }* \) T0 m
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in addition to 除了......之外 那就更是难免的了; }2 a( ?0 S' {# k4 d
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(五) 解释性添词 7 Y, H) @9 X! O) B3 B
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- J: y, U; Y( Z"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have 2 {) N# P. U8 M/ H' J
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
0 }$ z5 L& Y3 W7 T2 u* ?7 Wnever thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet " }, x/ y9 G1 N8 G" h9 q6 w1 q# ~6 \
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet. 0 m; U- Y4 f) S) f( A @ h
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。 1 N/ |9 F( f& E* C" [
8 I# W3 g# _1 C' R. o `: Q(六) 词无定译
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$ I/ e1 r; r5 u! o8 Z7 B7 l4 yIt is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or
, Y" r8 Y+ |9 J0 s$ ]' ?! Ncivilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later, ! E; ^7 I8 o9 @
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
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我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。+ M3 S4 z5 h2 B. m
, c, G7 [, ~7 @(七) 精炼译词 0 M) S! m+ N7 p) y1 u ?6 k
例子：
+ W, a8 F" }. p) XA new dignity crept into his walk.
2 U# e1 s) U4 E; b# l7 ~4 Q原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。 4 Z: Z5 d7 E3 ?9 _: G1 M; w
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。 % W# L9 Y1 l; j6 g" b* n- z- d2 b& Y8 Q o- b
L# z8 W7 o8 r5 v: U2 k o6 W' x/ w(八) 删削"When"字 3 K2 C0 R* I3 m, G4 @6 I
例子：
, V7 |. _# v% {5 g6 p9 h' w! }: c" y1. When he saw me, he was startled. % @9 q- C- d- w
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......)
8 ~2 u8 Q! Y( N- N R, l4 E2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the 7 t! s* p s4 d" n
head, and knocking on them round?"
: A8 y! u9 q$ _8 K「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)
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9 Q' u: Q4 Z. h! {(九) 感叹词的不同译法
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1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
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8 E' f2 M; j* V* N! _- m' J- T1 V"Why, Eva, your room is full now." 9 o5 A' C) C; W4 a! m
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 ' \! |3 @5 A; |; a) J& z( V/ h( q
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」
% E" u# U$ U, k/ ?6 H" B8 s# R2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?"
* m0 m! ?3 {7 z9 ^/ `: }+ C: e/ }「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
( X' ]( K) }% @+ g+ f6 N$ C$ b3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.")
+ R7 f- A% u4 A# M"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to , y) \4 t. m+ h
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader, ( A8 o1 w, _7 H/ J7 L
jocularly; ...
! A6 d- D6 b" K/ h- v' q+ C% m"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
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「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；......
2 P8 D* M2 R# [0 p「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 / g# f! Q b2 i8 g2 Q# }
* G, X% g+ i! D2 K0 K1 E9 h(十) 顺拆法 7 @# E* M% `0 z) [& @, Y. v8 X
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His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
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原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。
! B+ `4 R1 l" A' o/ l9 X改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。 # U6 t9 _* P: M+ J8 ?2 u# F
# `% t0 ~3 _, D1 M- s5 n, N(十一) 倒拆法 " }1 g" O* }; a. k# Q8 b" P- T
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To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute / . f2 ^$ a& v/ c2 d: a# f
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
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要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。
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(十二) 抽词拆句法 3 W$ x: t! f% m& V- M
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N8 @ B5 D' {0 q0 e/ e. ^' cAll the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
+ S- x7 j; r" B6 ~, ?! Teye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of # C; ]( H% P/ D$ v5 Q% A
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
, e, k+ a( W* ?# b. M, _从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。 |
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