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[转载] 十二式翻译绝招

绝招, 转帖, 翻译

作者：larryathena 来源：中国在线翻译网

(一) 同义反译法
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1. Only three customers remained in the bar. " I& L: G4 s" G" _; R% i- O6 A' x
酒吧间只有三个顾客还没有走。(不译：「还留着」或「还呆在那里」)
2. I'll be here for good this time. ) o6 n% l: t) v( ]. D
这一次我再也不走了。(不译：「永远在此呆下去」) 7 G( x/ b# _, U2 r( Q3 [, ^7 h
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
我不在家的时候，请别让炉子灭了。(不译：「我外出时，请让炉子继续烧着」)
4. "Wait, he is serious." % x& \7 y! @' ^+ n
「等等，他不是说着玩儿的。」(不译：「等等，他是认真的。」)
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!" ' |* _) l2 v7 l, V
「听我说，克拉拉，对这孩子可不能心软。」(不译：「......对这孩子要坚定」) 9 q; i, O) Q: O7 q8 R3 c! l( N, z' g1 _

(二) 删减解释词
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The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women. % Y  h4 n1 {5 \0 c/ \8 P
到南方去的人看见那些黑白混血的女郎，准定会注意到她们十之八九都赋有那种独特的优雅风度、那种柔和的声调和文静的举止。# j! r, F: s! N: e2 K# Q

(三) 短句拆译 2 P  y3 X: ?( N2 K8 _) z2 W0 g
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" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
「在六月里的一天早上，天气晴朗，......」
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(四) 译词推陈出新 ! `/ b* U& h+ v( |+ a$ m( s
例子：
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a 9 J  \+ M5 X# R# q5 ~: E6 j* F) F8 B
lower.
原译：当他可以大胆行动的时候，他发现自己除了一个情人所具有的那种普通的害怕之外，心里还充满怀疑、顾虑和踌躇。
改译：等到他不妨放胆去追求的时候，他却迟疑不定，顾虑重重。至于一般堕入情网的人那种种常有的提心吊胆的心理，那就更是难免的了。 ! w+ [$ b( l8 \( w% o) C
原词原译改译
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when 当......的时候等到......的时候

act with boldness 大胆行动放胆去追求 # c8 d& s6 p$ E$ S2 V+ o- @- d
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a lover 一个情人一般堕入情网的人 0 q" h; `$ M8 M- F
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ordinary fears 普通的害怕种种常有的提心吊胆的心理

in addition to 除了......之外那就更是难免的了6 C! K% ]% {# O1 c0 @/ x
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(五) 解释性添词   }" }$ V' W1 ^& J/ L6 P
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"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have 8 f8 ^* D) `% ?& W. m" J
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
「乔治，我真替你害臊﹗乔治，想不到你会干出这种事情来﹗俗话说得好：『滚着的碌碡不长苔，流浪的汉子不攒财。』我早晓得你就是这么一个流浪汉﹗可真没有想到你连贝格纳特和孩子们靠它过活的那一点点财也骗走，」贝格纳特太太说道。 ( x. L- [% F8 u& s* q

(六) 词无定译
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It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or 8 h- b! I. T: p  @8 |  [
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later,
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions. + |8 P& d' D5 |2 i
我们根本不必追问政府是否根据刑法或民法对范德比尔特提出起诉。范德比尔特不仅逍遥法外，而且在两年后又以极其凶狠的手段对政府进行弓一次巨大的诈骗。
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(七) 精炼译词 / ^( R7 F2 N7 N( u4 }0 ~8 {) Y
例子： 4 _0 |9 R' b9 V' t! ^
A new dignity crept into his walk.   {. F4 J4 R5 o
原译：走路的姿态不知甚么时候开始给人一种庄重的印象。
改译：走起路来，不觉平添了几分尊严。 : f; F3 O& Q; B& A& i

(八) 删削"When"字 4 s: u0 x/ ?% r0 `
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1. When he saw me, he was startled. ; ]3 V2 g* j' Y) L+ _
他看见我，吓了一大跳，(不译：当他看见我的时候，......)
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the
head, and knocking on them round?" 9 x) w% i* w$ I8 t) H. S
「你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心，你还拿鞭子没头没脑的抽，把她们打得死去活来，那有甚么用呢？」(不译：当你那些女黑奴哭得那么伤心的时候，你还拿鞭子......)

(九) 感叹词的不同译法
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1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
them!"
"Why, Eva, your room is full now." & b2 Z* z7 C( y
「嗐，妈妈，别这样﹗我喜欢这些花，把花给我吧，我要﹗」 8 W+ I7 b, v& p% k! ]" [
「得了吧，伊娃，你屋里的花都满了。」 , |0 k% v0 @* b  u- ?
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?" ! T! \, q: Z; O+ h; ~. Z5 z5 O6 P
「哟，真是怪事﹗」玛利说，「你干嘛非要这个不可？」
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.") + {& \: x3 _9 n* f* a! I
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to * Y+ g. ?- J% b8 ?
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
jocularly; ... # P! J( H4 ^1 j$ G
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
interval of silence. " L# K- b/ Z1 b
(「......哈利，你要是有良心的话。」) $ K0 H" B, Q$ t  ]# z. h
「得，干这行当儿的人能有多少良心，我也有多少良心--瞧，我的良心就这么一丁点儿，够拿出来起誓就得，」奴隶贩子开着玩笑说；...... " u9 i! U( ?, r4 }4 [% u" F5 S
「那好，哈利，这桩买卖你打算怎么个做法？」谢尔比先生在一阵令人发窘的沉默之后问道。 ( ~: @2 R$ D8 V2 V

(十) 顺拆法 8 x2 b  }' z; v8 V" y# P
例子：
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue # M, \2 X1 h" D6 @% e; `: e  |9 ]
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic, , z) R; x0 I7 W. Y+ j, A
social and demographic factors. & L. f' o0 [' g+ g
原译：他的代表团同意执行主任关于该基金会应继续为更好地了解经济、社会和人口的相互关系而努力的意见。 ) b# v  U7 u3 `0 \! w
改译：他的代表团同意执行主任的意见，/认为该基金会应继续努力，/ 以求更好地了解经济、社会和人口这三方面的相互关系。 : l/ @2 V) C2 [/ F# a

(十一) 倒拆法
例子：
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon. : o. R" N3 m5 f: T
要是一个英国女人看到他真像他自己所假定的那么烂醉，/ 她就会对他又恼怒，又厌恶，/ 而挪拉对他却又同情又宽容，/ 他在这中间看出了一点神圣的质量。

(十二) 抽词拆句法 3 t2 E5 M: Z9 M- {
例子：
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of 7 z/ h" ~5 |/ O5 E% i
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests. 8 z/ G9 I; u8 h- Q3 v
从边境到北京，一路上沿铁路线极目纵观，但见农村到处是茁壮的庄稼，彷佛铺上一块绿地毯，这说明丰收在望了。

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